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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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After you paddled out, you should face the sea and start searching for a wave. If you see a decent wave, rotate yourself and your surfboard towards the beach and begin paddling as swift and strong as you can. Bend your back backwards to keep the tip of your board from sinking, and when you feel the wave, you should stands up and position your feet horizontally on the board.
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After you paddle out, you should face the sea and start searching for a wave. If you see a decent wave, rotate yourself and your surfboard towards the beach and begin paddling as swiftly and strongly as you can. Bend your back backwards to keep the tip of your board from sinking, and when you feel the wave, you should stand up and position your feet horizontally on the board.

— Mister Micawber

  • After you paddle out, you should face the sea and start searching for a wave.
  • If you see a decent wave, rotate yourself and your surfboard towards the beach and begin paddling as swiftly and strongly as you can.
  • Bend your back backwards to keep the tip of your board from sinking, and when you feel the wave, you should stand up and position your feet horizontally on the board.
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After you paddle out, you should face the sea and start searching for a wave. If you see a decent wave, rotate yourself and your surfboard towards the beach and begin paddling as swiftly and strongly as you can. Bend your back backwards to keep the tip of your board from sinking, and when you feel the wave, you should stand up and position your feet horizontally on the
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