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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Comma, Which, or Semi Colon.
I am seeking employment and I am wondering which sentence is grammitically correct and/or is stylistically better>
1) My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I have earned a Thurgood Marshall Scholar designation, which is a distinction that is reserved for the top 16-35% of my class.
2) My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I have earned a Thurgood Marshall Scholar designation, a distinction that is reserved for the top 16-35% of my class.
3) My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I have earned a Thurgood Marshall Scholar designation; a distinction that is reserved for the top 16-35% of my class.
Thanks so much
1) My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I have earned a Thurgood Marshall Scholar designation, which is a distinction that is reserved for the top 16-35% of my class.
2) My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I have earned a Thurgood Marshall Scholar designation, a distinction that is reserved for the top 16-35% of my class.
3) My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I have earned a Thurgood Marshall Scholar designation; a distinction that is reserved for the top 16-35% of my class.
Thanks so much
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Hi, I am seeking employment and I am wondering which sentence is grammitically correct and/or is stylistically better> 1) My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I have earned a Thurgood Marshall Scholar designation, which is a distinction that is reserved for the top 16-35% of my class. OK 2) My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I have earned a Thurgood Marshall Scholar designation, a distinction that is reserved for the top 16-35% of my class. I prefer tihs version.
- Hi, I am seeking employment and I am wondering which sentence is grammitically correct and/or is stylistically better> 1) My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I have earned a Thurgood Marshall Scholar designation, which is a distinction that is reserved for the top 16-35% of my class.
- OK 2) My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I have earned a Thurgood Marshall Scholar designation, a distinction that is reserved for the top 16-35% of my class.
- I prefer tihs version.
- 3) My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I have earned a Thurgood Marshall Scholar designation; a distinction that is reserved for the top 16-35% of my class.
- No correct.
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Hi,
I am seeking employment and I am wondering which sentence is grammitically correct and/or is stylistically better>
1) My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I have earned a Thurgood Marshall Scholar designation, which is a distinction that is reserved for the top 16-35% of my class. OK
2) My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I
I am seeking employment and I am wondering which sentence is grammitically correct and/or is stylistically better>
1) My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I have earned a Thurgood Marshall Scholar designation, which is a distinction that is reserved for the top 16-35% of my class. OK
2) My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I
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Thanks Clive,
Let me ask you, are you sure that option 2 is grammitically correct? Apart from the style comment can one say:
My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I have earned a Thurgood Marshall Scholar designation, a distinction that is reserved for the top 16-35% of my class.
or is that a run-on. Do I need some sort of connecting wo
Let me ask you, are you sure that option 2 is grammitically correct? Apart from the style comment can one say:
My strong academic record is evidenced by the fact that I have earned a Thurgood Marshall Scholar designation, a distinction that is reserved for the top 16-35% of my class.
or is that a run-on. Do I need some sort of connecting wo
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Hi,
You later asked about this in a new thread, and I answered you there.
Clive
You later asked about this in a new thread, and I answered you there.
Clive
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