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Sailsofoblivion Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Comma use?

In this instance, have I used commas correctly? I'm not sure if it would read better if I added one after 'improve'...

Thanks in advance,
Emma

I knew that I could write, and this was partially why I wanted to improve so that I could not only write stories, but illustrate them too.
  

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sailsofoblivion I'm not sure if it would read better if I added one after 'improve'. I don't think that will help; it needs stronger punctuation or restructuring. You are trying to squeeze too much in.

— Mister Micawber

  • sailsofoblivion I'm not sure if it would read better if I added one after 'improve'.
  • I don't think that will help; it needs stronger punctuation or restructuring.
  • You are trying to squeeze too much in.
  • I knew that I could write, and this was partially why I wanted to improve.
  • I wanted not only to write stories but to illustrate them, too .
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sailsofoblivion I'm not sure if it would read better if I added one after 'improve'.
I don't think that will help; it needs stronger punctuation or restructuring. You are trying to squeeze too much in.

I knew that I could write, and this was partially why I wanted to improve. I wanted not only to write stories but to illustrate them, too.
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Mister Micawber sailsofoblivion I'm not sure if it would read better if I added one after 'improve'.I don't think that will help; it needs stronger punctuation or restructuring. You are trying to squeeze too much in.I knew that I could write, and this was partially why I wanted to improve. I wanted not only to write stories but to illustrate them, too.
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