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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Comma Use

Very personable and extremely articulate communicator with an excellent work ethic and varied experience in diverse work situations.

How do you think this sentence can be approved? Would you add a comma before the 2nd "and"?
  

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No commas necessary. 'Very' and 'extremely', and 'varied' and 'diverse' together are redundant; lose one of each pair. 'Excellent' is vague.

— Mister Micawber

  • No commas necessary.
  • 'Very' and 'extremely', and 'varied' and 'diverse' together are redundant; lose one of each pair.
  • 'Excellent' is vague.
  • Very personable and articulate communicator with a strong work ethic and experience in diverse work situations.
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No commas necessary. 'Very' and 'extremely', and 'varied' and 'diverse' together are redundant; lose one of each pair. 'Excellent' is vague.

Very personable and articulate communicator with a strong work ethic and experience in diverse work situations.
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AnonymousVery personable and extremely articulate communicator with an excellent work ethic and varied experience in diverse work situations.
How do you think this sentence can be approved? Would you add a comma before the 2nd "and"?

1) First of all, this is not a complete sentence; it does not have a subject and predicate. You need to add "He is," "S
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Thanks guys. By the way, this sentence is sort of a bullet point on a resume and I hear brevity is more important than adding things like "I am".
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I don't believe it is intended to be a complete sentence, Mark. It is an entry on a CV, I think.
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