0
Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Comma Usage: What am I doing wrong?

"A man kneels before the tree, a flower in his lap."

Is there something wrong with this sentence? If so what is it and if not why not?

Thanks!
  

Top answer

The comma is fine but, in most kneeling positions, people don't have laps.

  • The comma is fine but, in most kneeling positions, people don't have laps.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
The comma is fine but, in most kneeling positions, people don't have laps.


Related Questions