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Beardog Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Comma usage etc.

[Name] describes the [object] variously throughout his books, sometimes referring to it as a defined mental structure that organizes the personality, and at other times simply as the totality of the psyche.

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[Name] describes the [object] variously throughout his [books], sometimes referring to it as a defined mental structure that organizes the personality and other times simply as the totality of the psyche.
  

Top answer

Keep this comma.

  • Keep this comma.
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