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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Comma usage

He nodded tearfully.

To make it more interesting, is it ok to say: He nodded, tears in his eyes.

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Anonymous To make it more interesting, is it ok to say: He nodded, tears in his eyes. That does not make it more interesting; it merely makes it longer. The object of review and editing is to make a text shorter and more concise.

— Mister Micawber

  • Anonymous To make it more interesting, is it ok to say: He nodded, tears in his eyes.
  • That does not make it more interesting; it merely makes it longer.
  • The object of review and editing is to make a text shorter and more concise.
  • Keep your original.
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AnonymousTo make it more interesting, is it ok to say: He nodded, tears in his eyes.
That does not make it more interesting; it merely makes it longer. The object of review and editing is to make a text shorter and more concise. Keep your original.
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Thank you so much. I understand.
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