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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Comma usage

The motivation for this study is to address possibility of a confounding variable in the previous study and examine its impact on relationship satisfaction as well as its importance in predicting accurate explicit responses.

I am wondering if I need a comma before "as well as" ?

I do not think I do, but considering its already an idea after a previous conjuction...it seems like it would provide more fluidity, instead of seeming like a run-on sentence.
  

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Without any further context, I would write it thus. The motivation for this study is to address the possibility, raised in the previous study, of a confounding variable, and to examine its impact on relationship satisfaction as well as its importance in predicting accurate and explicit responses. Clive

  • Without any further context, I would write it thus.
  • The motivation for this study is to address the possibility, raised in the previous study, of a confounding variable, and to examine its impact on relationship satisfaction as well as its importance in predicting accurate and explicit responses.
  • Clive
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Without any further context, I would write it thus.

The motivation for this study is to address the possibility, raised in the previous study, of a confounding variable, and to examine its impact on relationship satisfaction as well as its importance in predicting accurate and explicit responses.

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Thanks . That does sound better.

Especially using the word "raised" , placing a "to" before examine, and a "the" before possibility (which was a typo) . I dont know why I felt I did not need a comma before "and" ?

Also, probably irrelevant given you had no other context, but I am testing the accuracy of explicit psychological tests versus implicit tests. So, I am indeed lookin

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