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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Comma or colon

Should I change the comma after 'Minions of Dark' to a colon?
The Dark Knights were strengthened by chromatic dragon mounts, the Tarmaks, and the Minions of Dark, an infantry force of goblins, draconians, hobgoblins, ogres, and human mercenaries.
  

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You could use a colon, but I suggest... Dark, which were made up of ( or which included) infantry...

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You could use a colon, but I suggest... Dark, which were made up of (or which included) infantry...
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Thanks so much Philip. How about this revision? The Dark Knights were strengthened by chromatic dragon mounts, the Tarmaks, and an infantry force known as the Minions of Dark, which consisted of goblins, draconians, hobgoblins, ogres, and human mercenaries.
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It's better than my suggestion.
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Okay perfect, thanks again for everything.
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