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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

comma needed or not

Hallo experts... In the sentence:

"Despite various angles which B. takes in his analysis of the photographic shock and the related aesthetic effects in play, a quest for those conditions under which a picture succeeds to engage the viewer beyond its intended, coded, calculated, and constructed impact seems to underlie them all."

do I need a comma before seems?
Your expertise is very much appreciated.
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Mo, and it needs other work: Despite various angles which B. takes in his analysis of photographic shock and the related aesthetic effects in play, a quest for those conditions under which a picture successfully engages the viewer beyond its intended, coded, calculated, or constructed impact seems to underlie them all

— Mister Micawber

  • Mo, and it needs other work: Despite various angles which B.
  • takes in his analysis of photographic shock and the related aesthetic effects in play, a quest for those conditions under which a picture successfully engages the viewer beyond its intended, coded, calculated, or constructed impact seems to underlie them all
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Mo, and it needs other work:

Despite various angles which B. takes in his analysis of photographic shock and the related aesthetic effects in play, a quest for those conditions under which a picture successfully engages the viewer beyond its intended, coded, calculated, or constructed impact seems to underlie them all
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