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Ryansamturner Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Comma Insertion
I have the following sentence which I'm not too happy with.
'First my legs disappeared then I was up to my waist in my own tears.'
Am I missing commas along the way or do you have any suggestions?
'First my legs disappeared then I was up to my waist in my own tears.'
Am I missing commas along the way or do you have any suggestions?
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' eg First, my legs disappeared. Then I was up to my waist in my own tears. First, my legs disappeared, and then I was up to my waist in my own tears.
- ' eg First, my legs disappeared.
- Then I was up to my waist in my own tears.
- First, my legs disappeared, and then I was up to my waist in my own tears.
- First my legs disappeared and then I was up to my waist in my own tears.
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Hi,
First my legs disappeared then I was up to my waist in my own tears.'
eg
First, my legs disappeared. Then I was up to my waist in my own tears.
First, my legs disappeared, and then I was up to my waist in my own tears.
First my leg
First my legs disappeared then I was up to my waist in my own tears.'
eg
First, my legs disappeared. Then I was up to my waist in my own tears.
First, my legs disappeared, and then I was up to my waist in my own tears.
First my leg
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