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Snarf Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Comma in this rhetorical question

Should there be a comma after "someone" in this rhetorical question, asked by a lawyer in a novel?

"So every time a man looks the wrong way at someone he is to be financially ravaged and maligned in a court of law?"
  

Top answer

A comma would be wrong there. Rover

  • A comma would be wrong there.
  • Rover
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7 Answers
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A comma would be wrong there.

Rover
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It would? But isn't there an "if...then..." relationship in what he's rhetorically asking? That is, "If it were right to charge a man every time he looked at someone the wrong way, then he would have to be financially ravaged and maligned in a court of law for it." See what I'm saying?
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I can see you're using two entirely different structures—one of which doesn't need a comma and another that does.

Rover
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But without the comma in the original structure, isn't it ambiguous as to who the "he" after "someone" is reffering to?
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It's clear enough to me.
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Oh, and here I thought conditional sentences had to have commas. Well, let me ask you, in that first sentence, if there was a "then" between the "someone" and the "he," would you still say there's no comma needed in that question, or would that change things?
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In that case I would have said that 'then' should be omitted.

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