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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Comma check plz.
In this sentence:
Sierra Miller, a 33 year old compassionate looking blond woman, is putting clothes away when she hears the sound of glass breaking.
would I need any extra commas?
Sierra Miller, a 33 year old compassionate looking blond woman, is putting clothes away when she hears the sound of glass breaking.
would I need any extra commas?
Top answer
I'd suggest adding three hyphens. htm
- I'd suggest adding three hyphens.
- htm
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I'd suggest adding three hyphens.
For some tips on using hyphens, have a look here:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/hyphen.htm
For some tips on using hyphens, have a look here:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/hyphen.htm
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I think it should be "... a 33-year-old compassionate-looking blonde woman, ..." (It's usually spelled 'blonde' in the feminine form.)
But compassionate-looking is a very strange adjective. How does someone look compassionate?
But compassionate-looking is a very strange adjective. How does someone look compassionate?
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