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Vsuresh Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Comma

Hi

Is the use of comma in the sentence acceptable?

This calls for a deeper analysis of the role of the village banks in fighting poverty, by all those involved in village banks and development.

  

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Yes, in fact it's desirable. You might also consider rewording. eg This calls for a deeper analysis, by all those involved in village banks and development, of the role of the village banks in fighting poverty.

  • Yes, in fact it's desirable.
  • You might also consider rewording.
  • eg This calls for a deeper analysis, by all those involved in village banks and development, of the role of the village banks in fighting poverty.
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Yes, in fact it's desirable.

You might also consider rewording.

eg This calls for a deeper analysis, by all those involved in village banks and development, of the role of the village banks in fighting poverty.

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