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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Comma

Should I place a comma after 'fact'? Valaran could not accept this fact and refused to depart with Tol and lose her position as empress.
  

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The sentence is long and looks a little bit clumsy.
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cboutin3Valaran could not accept this fact and refused to depart with Tol and lose her position as empress.
Valaran could not accept this fact. She refused to depart with Tol and lose her position as empress.
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