Comma?

But when we see that everything is marked with impermanence, we can stop the struggle. We can come to appreciate the way things really are. And the way things really are is the way of impermanence, the way of wondrous becoming, everything altogether unfolding all at once.

Can the unlined part be changed into the way of wondrous becoming, and the way of everything altogether unfolding all at once?

Thanks in advance!