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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Comma

are commas used correctly?

Their inappropriate attire reveals their immodesty, which, in turn, reveals their immaturity
  

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Hi, are commas used correctly? Their inappropriate attire reveals their immodesty, which, in turn, reveals their immaturity It's not wrong. But in modern English, people tend to see a lot of commas as rather fussy.

— Clive

  • Hi, are commas used correctly?
  • Their inappropriate attire reveals their immodesty, which, in turn, reveals their immaturity It's not wrong.
  • But in modern English, people tend to see a lot of commas as rather fussy.
  • I suggest this.
  • Their inappropriate attire reveals their immodesty, which in turn reveals their immaturity .
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Hi,

are commas used correctly?

Their inappropriate attire reveals their immodesty, which, in turn, reveals their immaturity



It's not wrong.

But in modern English, people tend to see a lot of commas as rather fussy.

I suggest this.



Their inappropriate attire reveals their immodesty, which in turn reveals their immatur
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