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User_gary Posted 18 years ago
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comitted girlfriend

She is a committed girlfriend for me.
My CPU/Monitor/TV got repair because water penetrated into it.
Whenever I tried to speak, he kept my mouth by glaring at me.
I told him to take his hands off the table.
Take Bus no. 33 to reach the "X" station.

Please correct my sentences.
  

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Here are some corrections She is a committed girlfriend. (For me doesn't sound right) My girlfriend is committed to me. My TV got repaired because water got into it.

  • Here are some corrections She is a committed girlfriend.
  • (For me doesn't sound right) My girlfriend is committed to me.
  • My TV got repaired because water got into it.
  • Whenever I tried to speak, he kept my mouth shut by glaring at me.
  • This one is perfect.
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Here are some corrections

She is a committed girlfriend. (For me doesn't sound right) My girlfriend is committed to me.

My TV got repaired because water got into it.

Whenever I tried to speak, he kept my mouth shut by glaring at me.

This one is perfect.

Take bus no.33 to reach station X.

Hope this helps.
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