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Sun 94 Posted 10 years ago
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comfortable area
I am write a short essay about ' A happy campus' and need your help. If you see any mistakes, please correct me. Thanks a lot in advance.
A happy campus has great surroundings (or landscpae?) and grounds. On the campus, there are many parks,and gardens where students can realx by reading or taking a walk. Also, it has a nice landscape.
A happy campus is located in the comfortable area where students can access easily using public transportations.
A happy campus has great surroundings (or landscpae?) and grounds. On the campus, there are many parks,and gardens where students can realx by reading or taking a walk. Also, it has a nice landscape.
A happy campus is located in the comfortable area where students can access easily using public transportations.
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sun 94 a short essay Yours is too short. It needs an introduction, a main body, and a conclusion. All you have is a fragment of the main body.
- sun 94 a short essay Yours is too short.
- It needs an introduction, a main body, and a conclusion.
- All you have is a fragment of the main body.
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sun 94a short essayYours is too short. It needs an introduction, a main body, and a conclusion. All you have is a fragment of the main body.
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This is a part of my essay. I posted the sentences because I was not sure if they have grammatcial or vocabulary mistakes. I would appreciated it if you could fix any mistakes in the sentences. Thanks for your comments.
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Your first three sentences (the first paragraph) all say the same thing. Eliminate two of those sentences and re=post.
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