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OttoJ Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Comedian profession includes
-If the comedian profession includes ten thousand people (=10,000 people working in it), only a few of them could succeed and earn enough to keep themselves alive, so it is not a good one to enter. Being a teacher is different. Teachers' salaries are fixed every month, and they stand a much lower chance to be sacked.
What's the correct verb I should use? include does not sound right. Could you correct the rest of my sentences?
What's the correct verb I should use? include does not sound right. Could you correct the rest of my sentences?
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It needs a lot of work. If there are 10,000 professional comedians, only a few of them can get enough work to earn a living, so it is not a good profession to enter; however, teachers' salaries are fixed, and they stand a much lower chance of being sacked. I have not, however, fixed your faulty logic.
- It needs a lot of work.
- If there are 10,000 professional comedians, only a few of them can get enough work to earn a living, so it is not a good profession to enter; however, teachers' salaries are fixed, and they stand a much lower chance of being sacked.
- I have not, however, fixed your faulty logic.
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It needs a lot of work.
If there are 10,000 professional comedians, only a few of them can get enough work to earn a living, so it is not a good profession to enter; however, teachers' salaries are fixed, and they stand a much lower chance of being sacked.
I have not, however, fixed your faulty logic.
If there are 10,000 professional comedians, only a few of them can get enough work to earn a living, so it is not a good profession to enter; however, teachers' salaries are fixed, and they stand a much lower chance of being sacked.
I have not, however, fixed your faulty logic.
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