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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Come together in crowds

Please check the following sentence out.

(1) One evening, Peter was invited to a wedding banquet.

(2) All the guests came together in crowds to the restaurant, offering their congratulations upon the happy event.
  

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Hi, Please check the following sentence out. (1) One evening, Peter was invited to a wedding banquet. OK (2) All the guests came together in crowds to the restaurant, offering their congratulations upon the happy event.

— Clive

  • Hi, Please check the following sentence out.
  • (1) One evening, Peter was invited to a wedding banquet.
  • OK (2) All the guests came together in crowds to the restaurant, offering their congratulations upon the happy event.
  • Not natural.
  • Say eg Crowds of guests came to the restaurant, offering their congratulations upon the happy event.
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Hi,
Please check the following sentence out.

(1) One evening, Peter was invited to a wedding banquet. OK

(2) All the guests came together in crowds to the restaurant, offering their congratulations upon the happy event.
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In #1, if add "attend" after "to" as written. Is it acceptable?

One evening, Peter was invited to attend a wedding banquet.
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