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Anita_a Posted 20 years ago
Come to me again
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00 with the heat in the transit 02 br
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00 making it all the more tastier. 02 br
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00 The sizzle in me 02 br
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00 kept the warmth foaming. 02 br
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00 The shy look from the corner 02 br
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00 of your eye was enough 02 br
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00 to tell me that you liked it too 02 br
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00 as much as I did and more. 02 br
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00 As the doors of heaven 02 br
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00 were getting closer 02 br
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00 for us to conquer, 02 br
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00 you backed off. 02 br
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Top answer
The end should be changed into a better one. 02 i 0-
- The end should be changed into a better one.
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1 i 00 The poem begins nice, but ends bad.The end should be changed into a better one. 02 i 0-
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Dear Anita , in your poems I'd always find sincere emotions , honest , but I like them because they show how delicate your feelings are especially in such a century .
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