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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Combine the two into one

Hi. Please help me to combine the following two example sentences correctly into one.

1. I think it will transform the traditional notions of classroom learning.
2. I also think it will make it necessary to at least reevaluate traditional notions of classroom learning.

Is this correct as a sentence that combines the two above? I'm concern about the definite article before the word "traditional" in example sentence 1 above and the absence of it in the sentence below. I think we can put the definite article "the" before "traditional" in example sentence 2, but I think the absence of it makes the sentence less restrictive when combined with the word "reevaluate" and think that's appropriate for this type of sentence.

I think it will transform and make it necessary to at least reevaluate traditional notions of classroom learning.
  

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It is awkward. I suggest: I think it will transform traditional notions of classroom learning or at least make it necessary to reevaluate them .

  • It is awkward.
  • I suggest: I think it will transform traditional notions of classroom learning or at least make it necessary to reevaluate them .
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It is awkward. I suggest:

I think it will transform traditional notions of classroom learning or at least make it necessary to reevaluate them .

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