Combine sentences into a coherent text using linking words.

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I have another thing that I need help with. I am really sorry for my English, but it is my first year of learning it. I have 22 sentences and I have to combine them into longer, linking them in such a way that they make a coherent text. First I will write the sentencess and later mine text.

1. Exercise was once for certain types of people.

2. These people were young.

3. They were strong.

4. They would be trying to do things.

5. These people were very specific.

6. Some people were trying to build their muscles.

7. Others were trying to slim down.

8. Others were trying to get better at sport.

9. But now exercise has a whole new meaning.

10. Doctors have discovered aerobic exercise.

11. Aerobic exercise aims at very specific effects.

12. It aims to build up key parts of the body.

13. One part is the heart.

14. Another part is the lungs.

15. Aerobic exercise requires exertion.

16. The exertion must be sustained.

17. The exertion must raise the heart rate.

18. It must work out the heart.

19. It must work out the lungs.

20. Aerobic exercise is not for muscles.

21. It is not for beauty.

22. It is not for strength.

Exercise was once for certain types of people, that is why they were very specific. I can provide you with many reasons, why people were trying to do things. First of all, some of them were trying to build up their muscles. Secondly, some were trying to slim down. Another reason to do exercise was to get better at sport. In most cases these people were young and characterize in a big strength. Nowdays, exercise has a whole new meaning, because of the doctors, who have discovered aerobic. It is important to mension that this type of physical activity aims at very specific effects. It appears to play an important role in building up key parts of the body. Take the heart or the lungs for example. First of all, exercise requires extertion. Furthermore, it needs to be sustained, what in result must raises the heart rate and hastens respiration. In another words, it has to work out the heart and the lungs. Although it is true, that doing aerobics makes your body working up, but it would be wrong to claim, that it playes important role in building muscles. On the whole, aerobic exercises helps you maintaine a good physical condition. One could argue, that you have to be young and strong to participate in these kind of physical activities, but I believe that age and strength doesn't play any role. It is important to mension that doing aerobic exercises, you are provoking whole body to do a physical exertion. I would like to add, that thinking that these kind of exercises have an affect on your beauty or strength may sometimes be true, but most of all it has a deep affect on your overoll health and endurance. Moreover, everything mentioned above comes from inside and not outside your body, so "you look how you feel".

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

You must try to do more combining:

(1-8) Exercise was once for young, strong and active people that were specifically trying to build muscles, slim down or improve at sport.

(9-14) But now, exercise has a whole new meaning: doctors have discovered aerobics, which aims specifically at key parts of the body– the heart and lungs.

(15-22) Aerobic exercise requires sustained exertion in order to raise the heart rate. Aerobics is not for muscle-building, strength or beauty; it is intended to work out the heart and lungs.

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