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Desk navy Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Colloquial correctness.

Sixty thousand students killed themselves last year. If this was a war this would have been one of the worst wars in terms of casualties.

Is the above usage of the pair 'was - would have been' correct? I came across native speakers using this pair while speaking. They said using 'had been - would have been' pair makes the sentence complicated and it's unnecessary for colloquial purposes'.

  

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"had been ... would have been" is correct. However, you might hear "was" used in everyday language, and most people probably would not notice it as a bad error, or even an error at all.

  • "had been ...
  • would have been" is correct.
  • However, you might hear "was" used in everyday language, and most people probably would not notice it as a bad error, or even an error at all.
  • I would avoid it in formal writing though.
  • If anything, the thing I notice most is the slightly awkward "This ..
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"had been ... would have been" is correct. However, you might hear "was" used in everyday language, and most people probably would not notice it as a bad error, or even an error at all. I would avoid it in formal writing though.

If anything, the thing I notice most is the slightly awkward "This .. this ..." repetition. I would say "This ... it ....".

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desk navyIf this was a war this would have been one of the worst wars in terms of casualties.

You ask about "colloquial" correctness. Given that point of view, I'd say the sentence is passable. I don't think most native speakers would be very troubled by it if it flew by in the course of an interesting conversation.

CJ

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