College Motivation Letter help

0 Hi. I want to continue my undergraduate studies at **** College. I write my motivation letter but i need your help as i am not a native english speaker. Plz help me to make my letter more adequate. Thanks here is my letter:02br
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01b00MOTIVATION LETTER 02b02br
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00My name is Klajdi Turlla. I was born and raised in 010200. Living in the capital city of my country I have been able to observe my country economical development. Since 1990 after the collapse of the dictatorial regimen Albanian business was improved very quickly. Now in 010200 thousand of business offers their service to the community. This is a very positive thing for the Albanian development. Being successful in the business field needs a lot of business knowledge. Business studies are available even in 00 but our universities do not accomplish the European standards. 02br
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00Since I was a little boy I had the desire to become a successful businessman. My parents also are involved in the business world and I want to continue and improve what they have achieved so far. The only way to make this dream come true is studying in a European school. There are many reasons for my desire to study at 00. I think the program offered is the right for me. For my opinion British programs are the best. Studying in your college will give me the opportunities to find a job right after graduation. Also as an international student I think I can find the needed support. Furthermore I think 00 is a grate city. 00 02br
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00To study at your college English language is very important. I have learned english since third grade (at age of 10) in public school and later in several private courses. Of course that the only way to confirm that my english is at the required level I have to do exams that shows my english proficiency. I’ll do the TOEFL test and than I’ll announce you my result. 02br
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00Society is very important to me. I spend the most of the free time with my best friends. As we live in the biggest city of 010200 the ways to pass the free time are a lot. Usually we play football, basketball or bowling. In the weekend we go to a party or to quiet places of the city where we can enjoy the day in peace. When I’m at home I like to read, surf in the internet, play guitar or watching TV. A lot of my social activities are planned by the school. Trips are organized in cultural and beautiful places in 00.02br
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00I would be thankful if you consider my statement and would be very satisfied to be accepted to 00. 02br
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00Thank You02br
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00Klajdi Turlla0-