College Essay, proofread/tell me what you think :]

Hey :], like many others im in the college admissions process as well. It would be greatlty appreciated if someone could read my essay over and let me know what you think. Suggestions, comments, corrections are all welcome. The format got a little funky when I pasted it on here. The essay topic was to write about something that has bennefited you throughout your high school career. Thanks!

Cheerleading has been a major aspect of my life since I was in seventh grade. Throughout middle school and high school I have participated in many extra curricular activities, both in school and my community. Cheerleading being one of the most influential activities, has taught me the value of hard work, the importance of working as a team, and time management. Being a member of a competitive cheerleading team also requires strong dedication, as well as a positive attitude.

Competitive cheerleading contains five components: stunting, tumbling, dancing, jumping, and cheering. Progressing in the two main and most impressive aspects of the sport, stunting and tumbling, requires intense training which is both physically and mentally strenuous. Participants must build up physical endurance, strength, and coordination in order to increase the level at which they tumble and stunt as well as mentally overcome the risk of self injury. Acquiring the skills necessary to become a successful competitive cheerleader can take many years of drilling new skills and routines. Although it is a difficult process, the self satisfaction and pride felt in one’s team when rewarded at a competition makes this tough journey well worth the effort.

In general, most high school sports seasons last about two to three months. Being that cheerleaders must first fulfill their responsibility of cheering for both football and basketball games and must also compete at their own events causes the season to last as long as nine months. As a result much time is spent among teammates which aids in the formation of a close bond and a high level of trust; this level of trust is crucial during stunting as well as tumbling. A competition routine would not be complete without all members of the team working to reach their fullest potential for the upcoming competition season and exhibiting their highest level of skills in this routine.

Trying to manage a busy schedule can be exceedingly overwhelming without the use of proper time management. Organization, having a positive attitude and being driven to meet all responsibilities and expectations are necessary when one is placed with the task of managing a demanding schedule. Being a student athlete, active member of my class and maintaining a part time job has taught me how vital proper time management truly is.

Being a member of a competitive cheerleading team as well as an active participant of all class events has been highly beneficial to my high school career. Simply by participating in a sport which I am passionate about, I’ve learned life skills such as the value of hard work, the importance of team work, and the significance of proper time management. I believe these skills have bettered myself as an individual and will be highly useful in my future.