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The_mystic_dude Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
College application - please someone help me and read through it!
Dear Sir or Madam:
Having completed my undergraduate studies at a business school in ***, I am eager to apply for the Bachelor’s degree program “Business Consultancy International” at your university of applied sciences.
Due to my interest in international business administration and my proficiency in English as a native speaker I believe your university offers the best course currently available. After completion of the Bachelor’s degree program I am planning to continue my studies and obtain a Master’s Degree in International Business Management at a foreign university and work abroad.
Having worked for an internationally oriented English-speaking company before, I look forward to working in a foreign country during my internship and studying Business Administration at one of your numerous partner universities.
Thank you very much for considering my application. I look forward to appearing for a personal interview.
Sincerely,
xyz
Having completed my undergraduate studies at a business school in ***, I am eager to apply for the Bachelor’s degree program “Business Consultancy International” at your university of applied sciences.
Due to my interest in international business administration and my proficiency in English as a native speaker I believe your university offers the best course currently available. After completion of the Bachelor’s degree program I am planning to continue my studies and obtain a Master’s Degree in International Business Management at a foreign university and work abroad.
Having worked for an internationally oriented English-speaking company before, I look forward to working in a foreign country during my internship and studying Business Administration at one of your numerous partner universities.
Thank you very much for considering my application. I look forward to appearing for a personal interview.
Sincerely,
xyz
Top answer
Reads ok but there is nothing that really makes you stand out. Last sentence: I hope you will give me the opportunity of a personal interview.
- Reads ok but there is nothing that really makes you stand out.
- Last sentence: I hope you will give me the opportunity of a personal interview.
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Reads ok but there is nothing that really makes you stand out.
Last sentence: I hope you will give me the opportunity of a personal interview.
Last sentence: I hope you will give me the opportunity of a personal interview.
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Thanks Nona!
I will modify the last sentence. Do you have any suggestions what I could write that makes me stand out, like you had said? Like things that are usually in the C/V? Or what would you say should I still add to my application/motivation letter?
Thx!
I will modify the last sentence. Do you have any suggestions what I could write that makes me stand out, like you had said? Like things that are usually in the C/V? Or what would you say should I still add to my application/motivation letter?
Thx!
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