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This is a Lego Collection description. This collection contains of five Lego movies. So, I have written the description please check if you find any grammar issue. Thank you.

Begin your adventure with Lego and this compilation unites the creative skills of five Lego movies.

CalifJim · Accepted Answer

anonymousThis collection contains of five Lego movies.

It contains the movies (no 'of'). Or it consists of the movies (with 'of').

anonymous~~So, I have written the description please check if you find any grammar issue.~~
So I have written a description (of it). Please check for any grammar mistakes.

As shown. Try to write one sentence at a time without running them together.

anonymousBegin your adventure with Lego. ~~and~~ This compilation unites the creative skills of five Lego movies.

"Begin your adventure with Lego" is not a description. It sounds more like an advertisement. It has nothing to do with what follows, so connecting the two parts with 'and' doesn't work.

The grammar is OK, but the meaning is obscure because of some strange word choices. For example, only people have skills; movies don't have skills. So the expression "the creative skills of five Lego movies" doesn't really make sense. You should probably rephrase the second part.

CJ

GPY · Answer

The two clauses are too disparate to be joined by "and". However, there may be other problems. Does the "compilation" consist of just the movies, e.g. as a DVD set, or is there something more? I'm not sure what "unites the creative skills of five Lego movies" is referring to. Is it referring to the creative skills of the people who made the movies, or the creative skills of the purchaser who might be inspired by the movies?

(Cross-posted.)

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