Cohesion,Coherence,Mistakes?

Hi everyone well i've written a paragraph about women's rights and i wish to have your opinions about it ,the occurence of mistakes , the coherence of it .Thank you in advance.

"A thing has always two ways from which you can see it .One side can appear to please you ,as the other may not.This previous approach can be applied to the subject of women’s rights which im going speak about from both the society and personal scoope.First, from an over view of the society, you will systematically point to the old and wrong notion taken by its individuals which is simply represented as the way of seeing women .weak and a vaccant person who doesn’t have the right to be respected or even possess or own property. Who is thought to be always under the guidness if not the control of men .Although this imperfect conception has somehow decreased in the present days, that won’t eliminate its existence .All of these concepts have caused the exhaustion of women’s rights.All of the above pictures in words make teh women as a victim of an under taking action of her rights without noticing that narrow category who tends to give , its disposals to her husband under the cover of love and share,ignoring the consequence of this action .to conclude a personal or social view may contradict at some points but both support one idea . "