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Persian Learner Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Coherence in a sentence.

Hi.
Please take a look at the following sentence:

Children who build early confidence and experience in these abilities are at a distinct advantage over those who have not.

Is it OK to write this way? Is it an advantage?
  

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The tenses do not match well. Better is eg Children who build early confidence and experience in these abilities are at a distinct advantage over those who do not .

  • The tenses do not match well.
  • Better is eg Children who build early confidence and experience in these abilities are at a distinct advantage over those who do not .
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The tenses do not match well.
Better is
eg Children who build early confidence and experience in these abilities are at a distinct advantage over those who do not.

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