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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
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#1 After a flagrant foul by his opponent, O'neal did not lose temper because he did not to be suspended. Yet, O'neal's coach had no faith to him and he rushed to him and made sure that he would have deterred if his most dominate player had retaliated his opponent.

#2 The coach was worried his most productive player would have suspended if he had fought back to the opponent.

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Nope. #1 After a flagrant foul by his opponent, O'neal did not lose his temper , because he did not want to be suspended. Yet, O'neal's coach had no faith in him.

— Mister Micawber

  • Nope.
  • #1 After a flagrant foul by his opponent, O'neal did not lose his temper , because he did not want to be suspended.
  • Yet, O'neal's coach had no faith in him.
  • He rushed to him to make sure that he would be deterred if his best player thought to retaliate against his opponent.
  • #2 The coach was worried that his most productive player might be suspended if he fought back against the opponent.
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Nope.


#1 After a flagrant foul by his opponent, O'neal did not lose his temper, because he did not want to be suspended. Yet, O'neal's coach had no faith in him. He rushed to him to make sure that he would be deterred if his best player thought to retaliate against his opponent.

#2 The coach was worried that
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Just a comment: It's O'Neal with a capital N. (And it was Wade, not the coach, who made sure he didn't hop up and take a swing at Stackhouse. It was a pretty blatent foul.)
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Grammar GeekJust a comment: It's O'Neal with a capital N. (And it was Wade, not the coach, who made sure he didn't hop up and take a swing at Stackhouse. It was a pretty blatent foul.)
Blatant.
It was, if ever was one.
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