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Ayan86 Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Clusmy sentence

Hi!

The whole sentence feels clumsy to me! How can I re-word it?

In 2014, he drew a scientific research paper which was evaluated with grade 9 (excellent).

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In 2014, he wrote a scientific research paper which was evaluated as grade 9 (excellent).

  • In 2014, he wrote a scientific research paper which was evaluated as grade 9 (excellent).
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In 2014, he wrote a scientific research paper which was evaluated as grade 9 (excellent).

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