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Snuppelina Posted 13 years ago
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These studies are significant for astrophysics to deal with problems of nucleosynthesis, which requires knowing reaction cross sections for gaining insights into the nuclear formation scenario.
The meaning is the following: the studies are important for astrophysics when the problems of nucleosynthesis are investigated and when it is necessary to know reaction cross sections in order to get a deeper insight into the nuclear formation scenario.
Thanks.
The meaning is the following: the studies are important for astrophysics when the problems of nucleosynthesis are investigated and when it is necessary to know reaction cross sections in order to get a deeper insight into the nuclear formation scenario.
Thanks.
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Why not just use your second sentence?
- Why not just use your second sentence?
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These studies are significant for astrophysics, especially when dealing with problems of nucleosynthesis which requires knowing precisely the reaction of the cross sections to gain insights of the nuclear formation
These studies are significant for astrophysics, especially when dealing with problems of nucleosynthesis which requires knowing precisely the reaction of the cross sections to gain insights of the nuclear formation
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Thanks! Sounds good, will think about it.
The only thing is that there should be "reaction cross sections", not reaction of cross sections.
The only thing is that there should be "reaction cross sections", not reaction of cross sections.
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