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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Clumsy sentence

So I spoke with him but he said he was busy so he could not help me with my problem, which according to him is not actually a problem anyway, as all I need to do is tell the authorities and they will have it sorted in no time.

Is this sentence messy/clumsy?
  

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Yes! Reword it into two or more sentences.

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  • Yes!
  • Reword it into two or more sentences.
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Yes!
Reword it into two or more sentences.
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