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Nicetomeetyou Posted 8 years ago
Grammar
Cloud you check these two sentences?
Could you check whether this sounds natural and free from mistakes?
Yesterday afternoon, a diamond ring and two gold watches were stolen from the jewelry store, without being noticed by the employees or the customers. It sounds like a detective story, so you may not believe it actually happened, but it did.
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Most of it is utterly redundant. This is all that is called for: Yesterday afternoon, a diamond ring and two gold watches were stolen from the jewelry store.
- Most of it is utterly redundant.
- This is all that is called for: Yesterday afternoon, a diamond ring and two gold watches were stolen from the jewelry store.
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Most of it is utterly redundant. This is all that is called for:
Yesterday afternoon, a diamond ring and two gold watches were stolen from the jewelry store.
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