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Plusluck Posted 10 years ago
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cloud computing

Is the following sentence correct or how to make it sound more natural? Thanks!

This new technology allows our customers to collect the information of use mode and preference of individual users to better understand the users' need.
  

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Plusluck Is the following sentence correc t? or H ow to can I make it sound more natural? Thanks!

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  • Plusluck Is the following sentence correc t?
  • or H ow to can I make it sound more natural?
  • Thanks!
  • Plusluck This new technology allows our customers to collect the information of use mode about the online behaviour and preference of individual users to better understand the use r's nee ds.
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Plusluck Is the following sentence correct? or How to can I make it sound more natural? Thanks!
PlusluckThis new technology allows our customers to collect the information of use mode about the online behaviour and preference of individual users to better understan
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Thanks! Actually, the information is about how the user uses the machines of our customers. Could I say "... collect information about the usage and preference of the individual users ..."
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PlusluckCould I say "... collect information about the usage and preference of the individual users?"
Yes, you could.
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Plusluck the information is about how the user uses the machines of our customers.
This construction is makes the meaning very confusing in my opinion.
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How is that so? We manufacture parts of the machines for our customers who are renowned brand owners. They want to know the information about how the user uses the machine. What's so confusion about it?
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