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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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0Vol : 5x20'gp02br
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00Instruction given by us: 2x20'gp truck in on 21/03/0802br
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00 2x20'gp truck in on 22/03/0802br
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00 1x20'gp truck in on 22/03/0802br
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00Cntr truck in by Nespalm : 2x20'gp truck in on 22/03/08 @ 9pm02br
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00 2x20'gp truck in 23/03/08 @ 3 pm02br
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00 1x20'gp truck in (still pending)02br
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00 00Your table is correct but u have to know that on 21/3 there is no container at tiong nam and PTP also that you have to show at your attachment ready shop sign form PTP so I dont need to send again 00 00.last tel conversation u informed00 00me that tiong nam will have to wait because the container have to be washed so driver will have to wait .do u know that how long driver waits 00 00for washing there to pick up the container, havent I inform u that from our side all is perfect its you who are to blame .do u remember that u ask us to derived urgently which is the container cancel for Yang ming but there was no information from your side about cancellation have u recollect. The Next day u can ask me that u all stupid or what which is the container cancelled 00 00why u all want to pick up. Can I ask u something u did mistake why u try to blame your clicks. As a forwarding why u all don’t know about closing time at all B4 u send this email u should check when closing this container tomorrow 23:00 why u mention that closing today have u check . Sure we have to give time to loading the container and also actually we no need to bother about closing at all. We have to follow your instruction but Box repair or short it’s not our mistake we inform do u and also we fax to u.02br
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00Closing time for ever mall you all inform us delivery delay .this is unreasonable charger for us to pay. First we like to inform that your request on 7/3 we give u the attachment together and we derived also on same day Not next day or night. Pls find the attachment and also your inform us to truck out also next day around 11am whereby the closing on 3pm .Max as per your email inform that delivery delay right for your understanding pls find the attachment Don’t misunderstand we blame u or your staff.02br
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00Evemall pontian : Syidah inform to me evermall have truck out on Sunday and max inform that,You all did charge overtime on this and she just pass the line to Max. Both of us discus about overtime chargers and I inform to u that I have confirm with Mr.tonny then we cut off the line.u all fax to me that the closing on Monday early morning 4am but NO body inform that vessel delay Monday morning sam fax to me The closing on Tuesday .have u think that once I rec information about truck out on Sunday and also receive fax saying that closing on Monday early morning what u all wann us to do? I rec information truck out and closing still we have wait for ?02br
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00Here I like to inform about shuting for Nm packaging.We need help from your side that if your all need any shunting we request our driver to get chop sign form your customer premise Because we confirm with driver according to driver already done shunting but you all inform haven’t done shunting its will help both side also.Last request from Mr.james and also Mr.Richew we like work with your staff all at wwgf and also we hope that u all will give us full support and also Please done simply scold us or use which is the word so heating. We all did mistake we agree on this but Please don’t use the word stupid0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 00You have a very large number of mistakes in your writing. There are so many that I don't always understand your meaning. Let me just try to correct the first few sentences.

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 00You have a very large number of mistakes in your writing.
  • There are so many that I don't always understand your meaning.
  • Let me just try to correct the first few sentences.
  • 02br 02br 00Clive02br 02br 01font 00 00Your table is correct but 01font 00yo02font 00u have to know that on 21/3 there 01font 00was02font 00 no container at 01font 00T02font 00iong 01font 00N02font 00am.
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0Hi,02br
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00You have a very large number of mistakes in your writing. There are so many that I don't always understand your meaning. Let me just try to correct the first few sentences. Corrections are in red and parts that I don't understand are underlined.02br
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00Clive02br
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01font00 00Your tabl

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