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Kak Serwan Posted 9 years ago
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Clinic Inspection

We would like to visit the rig site, so could you correct this email please?Emotion: smile

Dear xxx,

I hope you are doing well! EMS team intend to visit the rig site for the inspection of clinic, so we kindly request you to arrange passage through security guards.

I am looking to hearing from you soon.
  

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Dear ***, I hope you are doing well! <<< Where I live, it's not customary to include this kind of remark unless the person is a personal friend. The EMS team intends to visit the rig site on March 17 to inspect the clinic, so please arrange for us to get past the security guards.

  • Dear ***, I hope you are doing well!
  • <<< Where I live, it's not customary to include this kind of remark unless the person is a personal friend.
  • The EMS team intends to visit the rig site on March 17 to inspect the clinic, so please arrange for us to get past the security guards.
  • I look forward to hearing from you.
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Dear ***,

I hope you are doing well! <<< Where I live, it's not customary to include this kind of remark unless the person is a personal friend.


The EMS team intends to visit the rig site on March 17 to inspect the clinic, so please arrange for us to get past the security guards.

I look forward to hearing from you.
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You are great! Thanks for your helpEmotion: smile

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