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Marygracequipit Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing
Client follow up
Hi, kindly correct my grammar for my email below:
Ms. Cecilie,
Good Day!
Just want to ask you when is the best time we can finalize your unit. Is it today or tomorrow? Also, your unit that was temporarily on hold for you will expire today. Please let me know if you still have the interest to get this unit so that I can make it available for you, hopefully until tomorrow.
Should you have further concerns, kindly contact me through my numbers below.
Thank you and God bless you.
Ms. Cecilie,
Good Day!
Just want to ask you when is the best time we can finalize your unit. Is it today or tomorrow? Also, your unit that was temporarily on hold for you will expire today. Please let me know if you still have the interest to get this unit so that I can make it available for you, hopefully until tomorrow.
Should you have further concerns, kindly contact me through my numbers below.
Thank you and God bless you.
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Dear Ms Cecilie, When is the best time for us to finalize your unit, today or tomorrow? Your unit that was temporarily on hold for you will expire today, so please let me know before tomorrow if you still have an interest in obtaining it, so that we can make it available to you. Should you have further concerns, kindly contact me through my numbers below.
- Dear Ms Cecilie, When is the best time for us to finalize your unit, today or tomorrow?
- Your unit that was temporarily on hold for you will expire today, so please let me know before tomorrow if you still have an interest in obtaining it, so that we can make it available to you.
- Should you have further concerns, kindly contact me through my numbers below.
- Thank you.
- Sincerely yours,
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Dear Ms Cecilie,
When is the best time for us to finalize your unit, today or tomorrow? Your unit that was temporarily on hold for you will expire today, so please let me know before tomorrow if you still have an interest in obtaining it, so that we can make it available to you.
Should you have further concerns, kindly contact me through my numbers below.
When is the best time for us to finalize your unit, today or tomorrow? Your unit that was temporarily on hold for you will expire today, so please let me know before tomorrow if you still have an interest in obtaining it, so that we can make it available to you.
Should you have further concerns, kindly contact me through my numbers below.
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