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Kk Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
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Hello,
I am not sure whether the two sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics.
Can you give me a hand with checking them
Thank you for your help.
1. It is parents who can spend more time on their children that improve children’s academic performance.
2. It is parents who can illuminate their children's mind that help them build a positive value system.
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Structurally sound, stylistically awful, KK. Minds would be preferred.
- Structurally sound, stylistically awful, KK.
- Minds would be preferred.
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Structurally sound, stylistically awful, KK.
Minds would be preferred.
Minds would be preferred.
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May I make a suggestion, KK?
As part of your standard introductory form of posting a question to Forum commentators, you might want to consider this revision:
I am not sure whether .... make sense in term of grammar and semantics, and sound natural.
'Grammar and semantics' are only part of any language. Sou
As part of your standard introductory form of posting a question to Forum commentators, you might want to consider this revision:
I am not sure whether .... make sense in term of grammar and semantics, and sound natural.
'Grammar and semantics' are only part of any language. Sou
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