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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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The term ‘main mechanisms’ in the context of this essay is assumed to be those mechanisms which the key actors of climate change such as the IPCC / NASA / EPA consider to be most influential.

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I would say it like this: In this essay, the term ‘main mechanisms’ refers to be those mechanisms which the key actors of climate change, such as the IPCC / NASA / EPA, consider to be most influential.

  • I would say it like this: In this essay, the term ‘main mechanisms’ refers to be those mechanisms which the key actors of climate change, such as the IPCC / NASA / EPA, consider to be most influential.
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I would say it like this:
In this essay, the term ‘main mechanisms’ refers to be those mechanisms which the key actors of climate change, such as the IPCC / NASA / EPA, consider to be most influential.

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