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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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I enrolled on my course in September 2013. No sooner after my enrolment, I found myself contending with a particularly acute anxiety and depression, both of which were and still are caused by the deformity of my face.
  

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I enrolled in my course in September 2013 and immediately found myself contending with acute anxiety and depression because of the deformity of my face.

  • I enrolled in my course in September 2013 and immediately found myself contending with acute anxiety and depression because of the deformity of my face.
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I enrolled in my course in September 2013 and immediately found myself contending with acute anxiety and depression because of the deformity of my face.

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