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Jobb Posted 22 years ago
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Large numbers of industral projects and large-scale energy projects will be launched in the zone. The transportation for industrial products and a mass of raw materials has now not met the demand.

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Better express your opinion in detail.
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Jobb,
Large numbers of industral projects and large-scale energy projects will be launched in the zone. The transportation for industrial products and a mass of raw materials has now not met the demand.


The second sentence seems foggy to me. But perhaps with more context it would be clear.

I am not sure if those two sentences are part of the s
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I got a bit confused by you -- " you have raw materials that go into finished products, and those finished products are then transported".

What I wanted to express is:

For manufacturing some products, you demand a transportation company transports some raw materials into your depot, and then you begin to manufacture the products, and finally you de
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Is this close to what you intend, Jobb?--


"A large number of industrial projects and large-scale energy projects will be launched in the zone, but the transportation requirements for the industrial products and the large quantities of raw materials which will be needed for these projects have not yet been met."
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Yes, that is what I wanted to express.

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