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Pooyan Posted 10 years ago
Vocabulary

Clause Reductions

"XX is an outreach program, offered to girls, leading them through a series of activities showing that Computer Science is a fun topic."

I wonder if all clause reductions are grammatically correct in the above sentence?

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Pooyan I wonder if all clause reductions are grammatically correct in the above sentence? Too many commas. XX is an outreach progra m offe red to girls, leading them through a series of activities showing that Computer Science is an enjoyable subject .

— Mister Micawber

  • Pooyan I wonder if all clause reductions are grammatically correct in the above sentence?
  • Too many commas.
  • XX is an outreach progra m offe red to girls, leading them through a series of activities showing that Computer Science is an enjoyable subject .
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PooyanI wonder if all clause reductions are grammatically correct in the above sentence?
Too many commas.

XX is an outreach program offered to girls, leading them through a series of activities showing that Computer Science is an enjoyable subject.
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