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Christine Christie Posted 5 years ago
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Is this sentence correct:
a) "A deer was lying on the road, releasing screams of pain."
b) "A deer was lying on the road, heaving screams of pain."
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More natural English is eg A deer was lying on the road, screaming with/in pain. Clive
- More natural English is eg A deer was lying on the road, screaming with/in pain.
- Clive
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More natural English is
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A deer was lying on the road, screaming with/in pain.
Clive
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I love them both, but I am afraid I think that their power and poetry are accidental. "Giving" is the plain word, by the way.
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