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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Clause

Hi, is it appropriate to use “who” in the below sentence? Does the clause interrupt the flow of sentence?


Set in the kingdom of Mahishmati, it follows the adventure of Baahubali, who has been announced as the next king of Mahishmati Kingdom by Queen mother Sivagami.

  

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anonymous Set in the kingdom of Mahishmati, it follows the adventure of Baahubali, who has been announced as the next king by Queen Mother Sivagami. 'Who' is fine; repeating the kingdom's name is not. I have corrected it above.

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  • anonymous Set in the kingdom of Mahishmati, it follows the adventure of Baahubali, who has been announced as the next king by Queen Mother Sivagami.
  • 'Who' is fine; repeating the kingdom's name is not.
  • I have corrected it above.
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anonymousSet in the kingdom of Mahishmati, it follows the adventure of Baahubali, who has been announced as the next king by Queen Mother Sivagami.

'Who' is fine; repeating the kingdom's name is not. I have corrected it above.

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