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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Classtest grammatik

Hey,i have a few questions about a classtest text.We have written the first classtest this schoolyear(9 class) and i became a 4+ / D+ .The thema was statistiks and writing blogs.I read lots of website before the classtest and looked for vocabular for decribing but in the test my teacher said that they are wrong(iam in german by the side).

So here are few sentences:

The piechart depicts seven divided territories and their population in percent.

We can see at the first glance that in New South Walles live around 32.5% of population in Australia.

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In Western Australia is the population with around 10% half as much as in Queensland.

In South Australia the figures remained constant.The other didn't play a major role.

To conclude we can say that the Western of Australia has considerably more population than the others.

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It reached that the population isn't divided so fine to the landarea.

maybe somebody can help me
  

Top answer

Describing statistics is a very challanging test for one's ability in language. It is even a bit difficult for a native speaker! The pie chart depicts the population distribution by percentage among the seven divided territories and their population in percent .

  • Describing statistics is a very challanging test for one's ability in language.
  • It is even a bit difficult for a native speaker!
  • The pie chart depicts the population distribution by percentage among the seven divided territories and their population in percent .
  • 5% of the population of Australia live in New South Wales.
  • In Western Australia is the population with around 10% half as much as in Queensland.
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Describing statistics is a very challanging test for one's ability in language. It is even a bit difficult for a native speaker!

The pie chart depicts the population distribution by percentage among the seven divided territories and their population in percent.
We can see at the first a glance that 32.5% of the population of

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