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沈佩璇 Posted 9 years ago
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I refer to some theories and rewrite. But I don't want to emphasize "he says" in every sentence. How can I do to deal with the problem?

Barber, et al. (2009) show that when individual investors invest in stock markets, they tend to have crowd behaviour, one of irrational behaviour. Once Individual investors in the short run, Barber, et al. (2009) stress, have abnormal return, they tend to have abnormal loss in the long run; once individual investors in the long run have abnormal loss, they tend to have abnormal return in the long run. Moreover, Andrade, Chang, and Seasholes (2006) show that the phenomenon exists in Taiwan stock market.

  

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I don't want to emphasize "he says" in every sentence. How can I do to deal with the problem? Revise and be more concise.

  • I don't want to emphasize "he says" in every sentence.
  • How can I do to deal with the problem?
  • Revise and be more concise.
  • You needn't re-cite each sentence, and your second sentence doesn't make much sense anyway.
  • — Barber, et al.
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??? I don't want to emphasize "he says" in every sentence. How can I do to deal with the problem?

Revise and be more concise. You needn't re-cite each sentence, and your second sentence doesn't make much sense anyway. Is this what you mean?—

Barber, et al. (2009) show that when individuals invest in stock markets, they tend to

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