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Contiluo Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Chubby bodies
Please help me correct the errors of the short essay. Thanks a lot.
A Wild Animal for a Pet
I have an elephant doll, but a real elephant is too big for a pet. A koala, however, might be just right. I would like to have a koala as a pet for two reasons: koalas are soft and furry, and it could also keep me company. The first reason I would like to have a koala as a pet is because koalas are cute, soft and furry. Koalas have two big gray furry ears, covering with gray fur around their chubby bodies which make them look adorable. A koala would also keep me company. It helps me not feel lonely and bored. However, there is a problem on my koala. When I am not home, nobody can look after it. In conclusion, I would like to have a koala as a pet that is beautiful to look at, and one that could make me happy.
A Wild Animal for a Pet
I have an elephant doll, but a real elephant is too big for a pet. A koala, however, might be just right. I would like to have a koala as a pet for two reasons: koalas are soft and furry, and it could also keep me company. The first reason I would like to have a koala as a pet is because koalas are cute, soft and furry. Koalas have two big gray furry ears, covering with gray fur around their chubby bodies which make them look adorable. A koala would also keep me company. It helps me not feel lonely and bored. However, there is a problem on my koala. When I am not home, nobody can look after it. In conclusion, I would like to have a koala as a pet that is beautiful to look at, and one that could make me happy.
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Please help me correct the errors of the in the following short essay. Thanks a lot. A Wild Animal for a Pet I have an a toy elephant doll, but as a real elephant is would be too big for a pet.
- Please help me correct the errors of the in the following short essay.
- Thanks a lot.
- A Wild Animal for a Pet I have an a toy elephant doll, but as a real elephant is would be too big for a pet.
- A koala, however, might be just right.
- I would like to have a koala as a pet for two reasons: koalas are soft and furry, and it could also keep me company.
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Please help me correct the errors of the in the following short essay. Thanks a lot.
A Wild Animal for a Pet
I havean a toy elephant doll, but as a real elephant is would be too big for a pet. A koala, however, might be just right. I would like to have a koala as a pet for two reasons: koalas are soft and furry,
A Wild Animal for a Pet
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I'm confused about the first sentence as follows. What does the conjunction 'as' mean or function?
Does it mean 'because'?
I have a toy elephant as a real elephant would be too big for a pet.
Does it mean 'because'?
I have a toy elephant as a real elephant would be too big for a pet.
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Then please give me the steps that I could make my post approved.
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AnonymousThen please give me the steps that I could make my post approved.All anonymous posts go through moderation.
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contiluoHowever, there is a problem with my koala.There are more problems. Undomesticated, they cannot be house-trained.
And they are wild animals; will attack you with sharp sharp claws, if somehow they perceive you are a threat.
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